First off, I'm going to point out that I am not big on anatomy, so I can't really critique it but one of the legs looks bigger than the other one and one of the arms looks smaller than it should be. Take that however you will. Design wise, I really like the color pallet you went with and the use of shapes. I like the expression on his face and I really like the wing, I think that wing is gorgeous, however because the tips are the lightest and they are over the darkest portion of the composition, it distracts my eyes, and coupled with the expression on his face it makes me feel like he's saying "Look that way". This small problem as you know is a very easy fix. The cropped circle behind him narrows your eye down to the main focal point which is nice, and the direction of the wing and body pulls your eye out of it and helps everything flow. I really enjoy the looks of sketchy and use of tonal value. I think you've done a very nice job on this. I would love to see a series of these. Good Job.

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yeah i notice the leg and arm thing now, i should fix that. and yeah i meant the wing to be a focal point and i made his hair whiter too so that it can bring your eye back and the circle to keep you in the page and on the body. and yeah i also meant for the eye to lead to the wing. i love wings. but yeah i need to fix his arm and leg. thanks buddy for the advice, and yeah i am going to do a series i am working on the other one right now